The flight towards freedom

The brown little spotted deer tried,

To break the chains with which she was tied;

The curious eyes peeped in and out,

Making no noise so no one would doubt;

Now free was she, she gracefully wandered;

It revealed her beauty, but why she wondered;

She loved the new world it bought her peace,

She got the content that no one could cease;

She ran with the wind’s pace and power;

And then confident she was and stronger;

In her rhythm she walked with her enchanting eyes;

She tricked the enemies and hypnotized the spies;

it was just not the happiness that she got;

She got new wings and freedom she sought;

She spread them and turned into a bird;

High she flew and disappeared ..where? Everyone wondered!!

Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh

14 thoughts on “The flight towards freedom

    1. Its not about living creatures.. The deer symbolises a person or a woman who is trapped in her own restrictions thoughts and taboos..and it is about the mental rebel…


  1. Liked the last part about becoming a bird….it kind of shows that when you are free your capabilities have no limits and you can go beyond what you or everyone else thought.

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