The world has lost the meaning of care,
It doesn’t know why to share;
Getting practical night and day,
Killing emotions and love…Why stay? ;
Lacking concern, self centered everyone is,
So easily its forgotten how to make someone happy and please;
“Thank you, sorry” become mere formalities,
How we can cure hurt hearts with ease;
The world has dried beyond imagination,
Thus the growing ego has killed affection;
Copyright 2012 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
Good one !!!
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Thank you Saurabh
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The LOST CARE ::::;How true are the words; sound astonishingly unbelievable coming from a soul so young !!
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Thank you so much!
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How true!
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Lovely concept! Awesome dilineation of the feelings in terms of words! Keep it up 🙂
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Thank you so much Mr.Vikrant
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Excellent Concept. Beautiful
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Thank you Supriyo
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I agree with the theme of the poem.
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Thank you Mr.Asm
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The world’s indeed going down a dark path, but there’s hope. In a generation of artist like you that promise a new dawn. Words are the candles that light up every heart that attains a rendezvous with our flame…
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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This is what we experience in every walk of our life…well said Chitkala
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Thanks a lot Annu..
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wow , What i think and sometime wanted to say is written in this .
Love this one.
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Absolutely right and beautifully written. ❤❤
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