I’m lost in the desert with the sand beneath,
Burning my feet, and the hot air I breathe;
I’m lost in the desert with no water around,
All alone, the horrifying hurricanes that surround;
Frantic, frightened I try to hear,
A voice of affection of someone dear;
Here I wait sick with sweat,
How hard it is to hopelessly wait;
I am lost in the desert, no way to come out,
No one to save me how louder I shout…
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
Word-perfect….very nice!
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Thank you Madhura
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Simply amazing !!!
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Thank you Saurabh
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Heart touching..
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Thank you Aditi
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Perfect wording 🙂
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Thank you Ashok
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Simple and Excellent. Words touch to heart and feels like i am in desert
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Thank you Sanket..
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Thank you Sanket
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Awesome 🙂
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Mast .. 🙂
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Thank you pooja
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सुंदर आहे .. मी फारशा इंग्रजी कविता वाचत नाही… पण आता वाचाव्याशा वाटू लागल्यात इतकी शब्दांची सहजता आहे.. The Desert च्या पुढील प्रवासास खूप शुभेच्छा…
हेमंत देशपांडे.
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Thank you Deshpande Sir
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Can imagine d place through ur words … thats d mark of true & brilliant writer… keep up wid d thoughts …. keep it up…. !!!
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Thank you Ashwini
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Hi,chitkala while reading this poem i was thinking i m in deset.All words r arranged nicely.In marathi it is called yamak julale.
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Its not just the desert i am describing here,’The desert is a metaphor for the emotional state.
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I like this, very beautiful. Thanks for dropping by my blog.
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Thank you Mr.Allick
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A prodigious thought…your thoughts are very ripen…love the poem !
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Thank you Mr.Asm
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Amazing !
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Thank you
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Such imagery and meter! I appreciate this piece of prose very much — thank you!
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Thank you so much
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Wander on till you greet the Oasis. There’s a reservoir that awaits every parched soul.
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👍
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So touching.
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Thanks a lot.. Indrajeet Patil😊
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