I am lost and trapped in the crowds,
Searching and finding way to clouds;
Where no one will be there around,
Very high above the ground;
Where the tear from my eyes will be lost,
And soon will it fall on the earth as frost;
Unchaining, I will be a dove free,
Sweetly singing on a green tall tree;
Where the one who loves me will meet,
And silence itself will be the melodious tweet.
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
Beautiful !!
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Thank you so much swapnil
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Always Welcome !!
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Please let me help you. can you please accept my friend request on facebook.
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you soo much
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Fabulous imagination !!! đ
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Thank you Saurabh
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So it be, dear dove, With lots of love…
Dr. Ashutosh Mulye
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sounds like a sweet melody yet meaningful….
best ….
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Thank you so much
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Elegantly written
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Thank u Amit
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Unchaining, I will be a dove free,…Very beautiful thought…a wonderful poem indeed !
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Thank u Mr. Asm
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Very nice writing, glad you stumbled upon my crazy little blog.
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Thank you
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Awesome!!!
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Thank you Madhura
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” Where the tears from eyes will be lost,
And soon will it fall on the earth as frost…”
I m speechless; keep going… I hope, one day this little spark will brust into mighty flame.
Best luck..!
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Thank you soo much
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Very nice
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Glad to run into a fellow cloud admirer đ
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Thank you tushar
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If you want, i could email you a few pics I took. Might inspire đ
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Yes sure..I would like to!
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Sure do mail me
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I emailed you the pics couple of days ago. chitkaladitosh@gmail.com right?
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Thank you so much for liking my poem Playing God on my blog WordMusic. I take that as applause!
Brent Kincaid
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very b’ful.. just found your blog.. well written đ
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Thank you so much Nitin for your visit to my blog and your words of praise..
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So picturesque. I have always felt like this.
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Thank you Tushar…happy day dreaming!
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