You are vast huge with no fear yet so clear not near but so dear,
Your waves hustling bustling dashing against my heart I hear,
Sometimes you close up sometimes you go far away,
I try holding you back but you are too huge to stay;
I was born only to be “one “with you, and yours forever,
I see our colours mixing making us greener than ever;
Slowly we are being one, perfectly inseparable to be true,
I have lost myself being indistinguishable in you.
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
cute poem 🙂
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Thank you Rohan
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Wonderful…
I have started respecting your sensitive mind & also the thesaurus fixed up to give finesse to what you wish to say…
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Thank you so much
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“Wow” is the only expression that comes to my mind..
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Thanks
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Perfect!!
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Thank you Madhura
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Perfect!!!
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Very nice.. 🙂
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Thank you Sarang
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Thank you
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Very soothing 🙂
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Thank you so much temy hoang!
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Thank you so much
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You’re welcome!
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What a profound piece of work !
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Thank you so much Mr.Asm
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Thanks. Most of your poems are very meaningful…I enjoy reading them.
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Thank you so much for motivating me!
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ms chitkala.
thank you for your comment. as the fly is in the soup it must eat as well. haha. may god shine his face down on you and your mission this day and always. god bless
sincerely
General Bebo T Hope
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“I have lost myself and am indistinguishable mixing in you.” Beautifully worded.
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Thank you so much ! Thanks for reading my poem and commenting!
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Thanks for sharing your poems Chitkala – I will enjoy following you. In your Bio you say, words drench you… this poem is drenched in beautiful metaphor. Thank you also for visiting my place 🙂
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Thank you sooo much…m overwhelmed with your compliments!Thank you for your kind words.
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my pleasure – you’re very good.
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Thank you again
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“Great astounding piece! This was absolutely brilliant, genius, outstanding. It was remarkably enlightening and perfectly worded!”
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Thanks a lot!!!I am glad u appreciated it!!!Thank you so much 🙂
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This is so romantic, the meeting of the sea and the river…
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Thanks Aslesha😊😊😊
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