Time passes turning the tears into smile,
Life takes a turn and changes in a while;
Its riddle, an enigma & a mysterious secret,
To puzzle it out well I have no strength left;
Trapping the content in my very last breath i wish,
Never make demands which will never accomplish;
Life gives birth to hopes which teach hearts to dream,
Which fly high with wings and brightly they beam!
Desire is the root cause of sorrow which i will kill,
Freeing myself from the life with a pleased feel;
O death, embrace me breaking all the ties,
In the arms of my love closing my eyes.
-Chitkala
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Greatly written. Loved the ending words. Killing of desire is tough.
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Thank you so much darshit
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Very philosophical poem…beautiful !
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In full swing with words…
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I guess love is god ,else its contradictory
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No love doesn’t mean God here..it’s lover ..it is contradictory.. But that is how life is full of contradictions!
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Excellent post…but you will most assuredly transition, not die. 🙂
http://faithfilled23.com/2015/09/04/my-mansion-in-the-sky/
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Thank you so much…of course it’s just a poem….!!!!
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I love it. I will die from this world and INTO my Lover’s arms, which hover near me always!
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Thank you for your kind words!thoughts alike!!
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So beautiful.
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Thank you for your appreciation
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very nice – i like the accompanying picture also 🙂
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Thank you again
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you for reblogging my post
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You’re welcome
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🙂
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This is really good 🙂
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Thank you sherin
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chitkala so what is your wish in mba?To become very rich by doing business 🙂 ?
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Life is about happiness not riches
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For some people happiness lies in becoming rich right?I only meant to say business should also help people.what is more likely i think would happen with a person like you with a soft heart customers can take advantage 😀
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Thank you so much for liking my poem Loving Another Man. I am so pleased.
Brent Kincaid, WordMusic.
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U r welcome
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Cute lines
Though they sound small, they mean alot.
Great job
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Thank you for your words of praise Pavan
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My pleasure 🙂
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You are welcome
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There’s something therapeutic and alluring about writing concerning death. I too like to write concerning topics I’m not necessarily personally involved with. That’s the beauty of poetry- exploring emotions/subjects foreign to ourselves in an attempt to understand someone else. Thank you for your expression 🙂
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I am very happy u understood it well..many unnecessary conclude that it’s the reflection of the poet..but poets may paint emotions not experienced by themselves!!Thank you for your compliment!!
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The assumptions can be frustrating, I know. I wrote a poem about letting go of an unhealthy relationship and it included a line about vows. Even though I have a perfectly wonderful marriage, I still got messages from close friends asking if all was okay. Crazy. I write a lot based off scenes I really love in books. Readers don’t always know that.
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Agreed !
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Thanks!!!
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☺
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