My last wish

Time passes turning the tears into smile,

Life takes a turn and changes in a while;

Its riddle, an enigma & a mysterious secret,

To puzzle it out well I have no strength left;

Trapping the content in my very last breath i wish,

Never make demands which will never accomplish;

Life gives birth to hopes which teach hearts to dream,

Which fly high with wings and brightly they beam!

Desire is the root cause of sorrow which i will kill,

Freeing myself from the life with a pleased feel;

O death, embrace me breaking all the ties,

In the arms of my love closing my eyes.

Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh

37 thoughts on “My last wish

  1. For some people happiness lies in becoming rich right?I only meant to say business should also help people.what is more likely i think would happen with a person like you with a soft heart customers can take advantage πŸ˜€


  2. There’s something therapeutic and alluring about writing concerning death. I too like to write concerning topics I’m not necessarily personally involved with. That’s the beauty of poetry- exploring emotions/subjects foreign to ourselves in an attempt to understand someone else. Thank you for your expression πŸ™‚


    1. I am very happy u understood it well..many unnecessary conclude that it’s the reflection of the poet..but poets may paint emotions not experienced by themselves!!Thank you for your compliment!!

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      1. The assumptions can be frustrating, I know. I wrote a poem about letting go of an unhealthy relationship and it included a line about vows. Even though I have a perfectly wonderful marriage, I still got messages from close friends asking if all was okay. Crazy. I write a lot based off scenes I really love in books. Readers don’t always know that.

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