You had never ever touched my body
But every emotion more than a buddy
The desires in me had doused their charm,
Now lit sparkled in the dark and sung a song;
My life was still with a lull and badly bent,
Waves of ecstasy danced with contentment;
The feelings soon changed their colours,
Became birds and flew free with no efforts;
Your eyes and love dressed me pretty,
Caressed me and turned into a beauty,
My melodyless life had killed the rhythm in me,
Plucking strings of heart you created music in me;
My naive delicate heart for you was full of trust,
The first true love drop who quenched my thirst;
It lay frozen deep down and itβs you, whom it missed,
Your ray of warmth melted it with love and kissed.
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
Beautiful love poem !
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Thank you so much…
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Beautiful !……………………………………………………………………
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Thank you for your kind words!
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Really well written π
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Thank you for your kind words!
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Amazingly wonderful.
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Thank you so much for your kind words!!
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Beautifully portrayed!
~ Rahul
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Thank you rahul!Thank you for visiting my blog and commenting!
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I do love a good Love Poem and this one is very nice. Thank you for sharing π
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Thank you so much
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the pleasure is mine Chitkala π
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WOW! WOW! WOW! What a way to describe THAT love! So glad for your faithful visits! His faithfulness avails us all! π
His love in my heart for all, thia/Basilia
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Thank you so much for your words of praise…keep reading…
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Beautiful poem chitkala π
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Thank you soo much!!!!!
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My pleasure. Happy Diwali π
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Happy diwali to you too!!
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Lovely
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Thank you!!!!
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Reblogged this on prakashag and commented:
Wow what a flow of words
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Thank you so much for reblogging my poem..thanks for your compliment
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Need lot of patience to understand MBA s poetry . Read MBA meaning in one story written by me .
My Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara : in 12 countries , 80 library
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Yes sure!!I will definitely read your book and get back to you soon π
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Thanks Chitkala . ( never heard this name ) A Rose will not smell less sweet if it’s called by another name . Book available from Notion Press online site , Flipkart , Amazon . Do message when you order to inflate my ego π
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Thank you πYes sure!!!ππ
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Doused their charm.. Loved this line ππ
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Thanks a lot Mr.Robert
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Awesome! Beautiful.
Would reblog on mine asap!
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Thank you soo much once again
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Reblogged this on R K Karnani blog and commented:
Loved this Poem big time. Sharing. I am sure you will enjoy it. For more such Poems do visit the original Blog at https://chitkaladitosh.com/
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Thank you soo much!!!!
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First love β€οΈ sigh!
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ππ
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