Mirage of the day disappeared in hot air
In search of water and no time to stare,
Evaporated the water which was never there
Leaving behind deep inside a burning desire
Walking endless distance with blink-less gaze
Running towards it with tremendous pace
Still knowing, it was no longer here
Craving fruitlessly for it without fear
With blindfolded craziness unbelievable
A magical fantasy indeed unachievable!!!
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
That was really good 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 Mr.Richard
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Welcome 🙂
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A beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much
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Beautiful
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Thanks nisthur
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☺
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seeing is
almost
believing 🙂
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And when you realise its not the reality its painful
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may understanding be held
by tender healing.
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Just beautifully expressed! Thanks for your like! Like yours as well!:-)
His love in my heart for all, thia/Basilia
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Thank you thia!!!
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Thanks for commenting
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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Elegant!
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Thank you for visiting my blog and for your compliment!
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a dream can be somewhat of a mirage,
until focus comes into view ….
nicely done Chitkala :O)
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True !!thank you Mr Jimi
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WOW !
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Thank you
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I love that poem.
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Thank you so much!!m glad u did!
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Mirage…Leaving behind deep inside a burning desire…desire to read beautiful poem like this !
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Thank you again
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Very nice.
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Thank you so much
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lovely poetry 🙂
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Thank you….I am glad you liked it!
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you’re very creative and have a way with words, so its my pleasure to read them 🙂
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Thank you so much for the words of appreciation ..thanks a loy
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Agreed with so many. Very good, lovely poem
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Yes, I like this.
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Thank you so much !
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Thank you
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Beautifully penned. 🙂
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Thank you soumya 🙂
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Welcome. 🙂
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Beautiful !!
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Thanks Nisthur
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☺☺
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This happens with me too!!
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😊
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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