I closed my hopeless eyes with ease
Leaving the decision to two buddies;
Little ones shouldering the burden,
Now would decide where to turn;
Searching for special shelter,
Not running helter-skelter;
My happy feet will set me free,
A winged nightingale on a tree;
Till I count from one to hundred,
In the right heaven I would tread;
They will know who all wait for me,
They would choose the right for me.
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
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Beautifully written……Keep writing….feeling proud
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