The lost emotion,
Flew away with the wind,
Like the butterfly with a broken wing;
The little tear,
Slipped down in the rain,
Searching itself in the lake of pain;
The blush on cheeks,
Disappeared in simple smiles,
Walking in desert spread across miles,
That lost love,
Vanished in the dark,
It failed to understand the loving heart…
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
Wow, I truly love this! Beautiful.
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Thank you sooo much!!!!
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You’re welcome honey!! ❤️
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Reblogged this on INK AND QUILL and commented:
I just love this poem. It’s so beautiful!
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Thank You!! :)I am glad you liked it!
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I loved it! ❤️
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Thank you again!!
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My pleasure!! X
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A beautiful thought…every cloud has a silver lining…beautiful poem !
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Its just a poem!!!One emotion lost in many lines!!!
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Thank you Mr.Asm…
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This is beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you so much!!
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My pleasure. 🙂
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🙂
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Such a lovely portrayal! ❤
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Thank you for you appreciation!!
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Thank you for ur appreciation!!
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“The little tear,
Slipped down in the rain,
Searching itself in the lake of pain;”
My favorite 🙂 I have a friend right now living out this image and it is a painful thing to witness. You painted the picture beautifully.
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I am glad you felt it liked it and I was able to paint what somebody lived!!
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i love the ebb and flow, the continuance of the piece. sweet 🙂
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Thank you so much!!!
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You create beautiful images with your words…I enjoy your application of literary devices and the honesty of your pen…beautiful poetry
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Thank you for you genuine praise and appreciation!! I am glad you liked it 🙂
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You are kindly welcome!! 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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Hat’s off to you..! Seems you r gifted..!
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Thank you so much for your genuine compliment!!
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much
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A lovely swing of words you have, and, thanks for reading my blog at nothingcluelesslost.com
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Thank you for your words of praise !You are welcome!
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Hello beautiful! Nice to see your faithful visit again. I like your ‘Lost Emotions’. It came to me a long time ago, those are ‘Feelings–just fleeting emotions with no intrinsic value.’ It’s worth it to rid our minds of such distractions. 🙂
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Thank you so much!!Glad with your appreciation!
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So simple and lovely. thanks!
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Thank you so much for your genuine appreciation!!
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Beautiful! I particularly love the “Lake of Pain” idea 🙂
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Thank you so much for your sincere praise!!
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Status Quo
FEBRUARY 4, 2015 / DOUGSTUBER / EDIT
Untitled We are all humans .
There is no doubt, even though this poem is 16 years old, the this type of problem
is now a lot worse than back then.
Status Quo
For now the streets are cluttered:
The poor kill off the poor,
But this won’t last forever
If the “Quo” keeps getting worse.
Guns for sale in neighborhoods
Where crime is the only living
Quarts and vials and bullets
Take without ever giving.
“Innocent” bystanders
Are the ones to blame.
Standing by in times like these
Leaves everything the same.
The quo goes “living standards
Will be on the decline.”
While multi-national barons
Continue their money climb.
No chums around a fireplace
When you can’t pay the bills.
While money-man is traveling
In search of bigger thrills.
Sooner rather than later
The poor will raise their arms.
Replacing all the suited men
Regardless of the harm.
The system as we know it’
Is fading thanks to this:
The greedy haven’t realized
Their life ain’t worth a piss.
The ticking clock inside the bomb
Has passed the witching hour.
There is little hope for most,
So when will freedom flower?
It will when people with the time
Turn to lend a hand,
It will when greedy governors
Give back a hunk of land
The quo has made it possible
For us to live like rats.
Your life to them means nothing
You could end up a stat.
As the status quo gets worse
Violence rules the day.
We better help each other now.
Let us pray.
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Loved it!!!!
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It’s so sad when people walk away from love, or deny love for frivolous or self-hatred issues. Or when a couple falls out of love. Some hang on though all positive emotions are missing. This happens a lot once a couple has children. One is happy, then othr not. The love is gone but they fake it to keep the children on their path.
Broadly, when violence and greed take over for caring and sharing people get trapped in The hate and forget how to love entirely. In my country many were denied love because their parents had none
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Very true…its the story of many lips!!!love should be eternal and cherished for long…
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Lovely poem in its simplicity and depth.
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Thank you so much!!
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I have been reading several of your compositions, and have to say, that I really love your stuff. It really cuts to the heart, and the words are so moving. I am inspired by your writings, as I am sure others are as well
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Thank you so much!I am overwhelmed by your appreciation!! I am glad u liked it 🙂
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This is absolutely beautiful. It seems to have a profound depth, beyond my calibre to perceive. Have a look at my page as well, would love to hear from a wonderful poet such as you. Cheers! 🙂
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Thank u so much!I am overwhelmed by your praise!!!I will surely visit ur page
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Absolutely beautiful<3
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Thank you so much!!
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You are more than welcome<3
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🙂
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:-)<3
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I especially love the last stanza.
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Thanks a lot!!
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Butterfly with a broken wing..so touching!
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Thank you Saima!
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