When I shiver with fear,
My eye will drop a tear,
I will need someone dear,
To be there to hear;
My heart sinks so low,
And my smile says ” no”,
Tough stories all in a row,
You will be the first to know;
The grief will crowd in a hurry,
My wish I would try to bury,
With every reason to worry,
In you I will find my sanctuary!
Chitkala Mulye
So Simple and yet so Profound. thank you
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Thank you so much Mr.David for your genuine appreciation!
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It’s my pleaseure, writing doen’t have to be clever or complicated just good. You’re welcome
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Very true!Some times beauty lies in simplicity….
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Superb rhyming(Y).
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Thank you so much Mr.Upen
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You are Welcome:)
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Thank you!!
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Very beautiful and heart touching 🙂
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Nicely done
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Totally lovely!
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Thank you soo much!!
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Absolutely beautiful arranged…words sang to me.
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Your face is as beautiful a poem as I have seen. Thanks for visiting my blog. I have enjoyed visiting yours.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Very lovely and meaningful poem…Poetry is the sanctuary for a poet and for the readers who love poetry !…Oh poem, in you I will find my sanctuary!
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Lovely comment.. Very poetic!!
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you so much
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I feel, grief is the price we pay for love and as u rightly said people in grief need someone dear to hear them without judging them. Very meaningful poem. Nice..!
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Thank you so much
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I love this. it is not easy to maintain a rhyme scheme and still give such a hefty message
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O thank you soo much!!I am happy that you liked it 🙂
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