Learn the ‘transparency’ of water!
It’s astonishing! It easily takes color;
Hasty flow like racing water and the time,
Towards future, leaving memories behind;
Un-expectant, unconditional heart so clear,
Quenching thirst and healing everyone near;
Like free untrammelled un-arrested flow,
Nourish and flourish wherever you go.
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
Chitkala Mulye 
Awww! Your poem took me to a man named Dr. Emoto who did research on the memory of water. He’s worth to have a look at to see his ice crystals as well. Be well
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome
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I will surely have a look
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Yes do it is very interesting. Be well
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I love this! Just wonderful.
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Thank you so much
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Very well said, Chitkala ! I love this !
Water is a wonder created by almighty ! its anomalous behavior also supports life !
In Sanskrit they call it ” JEEVAN ” , that means life !
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Thank you so much!!!!I am glad you liked it 🙂
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Your poem is also ‘transparent’. Transparency makes you feel… peaceful, permanent and unbroken. Nice, fascinating..! Keep it up.
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Thank you so much…for your sincere praise 🙂
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Beautiful. So simple yet explains so much. I wouldn’t have thought of it like that.
Also, thank you for giving my poem, The Path of Fate, a Like.
I’m new to WordPress and new to sharing my work with the world. I hope it connects with someone. I’m attempting to post about 5 poems a week with reviews of stuff on the other days.
-Drem of https://artofdrem.wordpress.com
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Thank you so much!!!yes liked yours too!!
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There is much that we can learn by observing the nature of water. Nicely written.
P.S. – Thanks for stopping by our blog! Hope to see you there again soon. 🙂
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Thank you so much ..for your praise and appreciation 🙂
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Hi, thanks for the like. Keep writing and enjoying poetry.
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You are welcome!!
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Life depends on water…million dollars per glass !…very meaningful poem
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Was waiting for you comment!!feeling blessed!!
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Thank you so much!!
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Very well done! The music—meter and prosody is what makes a poem a real poem. Three stops in the first stanza, and then the next rushes (the precise choice and arrangement of words) ahead. The line, “Like free untrammelled un-arrested flow” is perfect iambic pentameter.
Every day, I see poems that are actually prose pieces arranged in a column of short lines and no music I can hear. To quote Ezra Pound (the art, not the artist, people) hopefully without paraphrase, “When poetry moves too far from music, it rots.”
Do I sound like a madman about formal poetry? I am!
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You can find beauty in the simplest thing of nature… Beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank u so much
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Welcome dear 🙂
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Very beautiful thought…water Quenching thirst and healing everyone near…very unselfish entity like a poet !
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Thanks a lot for ur words of praise!!!
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One must be like water. I agreed with your thought.
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😊
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