Closing your eyes
You refuse to see the light
Though it’s so bright
You show me the dark
I feel afraid
And run to get embraced
I find nobody
But my shadow calm
In my own arms
Your perception
Far from reality stark
Lost in the dark
Hidden in sorrow deep
Searching in my loneliness
I found the immense happiness!
-Chitkala Mulye
“Searching in my loneliness I found the immense happiness!” Sounds beautiful to me.
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Thanks a ton!!
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Wonderful poetry!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank u for reblogging my post 🙂
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you’re welcome:)
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search as deep as possible if you can Chitkala,
and ye shall find …. :O)
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Wonderful Job!
‘I find nobody
But my shadow calm
In my own arms’
the best thing of loneliness
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation!!
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Thanks a lot for your kind words of appreciation!!
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Reblogged this on yogalightsite.
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Thank you so much for reblogging my post!!
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I like it
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Thanks AJ
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You write beautifully. Quite rich vocabulary you have. Thanks for visiting my blog,:)
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Thank you so much Kaushal!!!
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You’re most welcome.:)
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I write and blog on Fetlife would you mind if I quote this on a journal piece I am working on?
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Do you want to quote my poem?If yes as long as my name is mentioned there..I have no issue
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It goes without saying dear lady
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Thank you so much!!! Do send me a copy of it once you publish it 🙂
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It will take awhile as I right to types of poetry and I want that one to be more mediative and respectful
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Ok!
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The poem conveys the message that sometimes there is a joy in loneliness…there is a bliss in solitude …which is true…a lovely poem !
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Thank u so much 🙂
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thats so interesting with a message
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Thank you so much 😊
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