Closing your eyes
You refuse to see the light
Though it’s so bright
You show me the dark
I feel afraid
And run to get embraced
I find nobody
But my shadow calm
In my own arms
Your perception
Far from reality stark
Lost in the dark
Hidden in sorrow deep
Searching in my loneliness
I found the immense happiness!
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
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“Searching in my loneliness I found the immense happiness!” Sounds beautiful to me.
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Thanks a ton!!
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Wonderful poetry!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank u for reblogging my post 🙂
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you’re welcome:)
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search as deep as possible if you can Chitkala,
and ye shall find …. :O)
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Wonderful Job!
‘I find nobody
But my shadow calm
In my own arms’
the best thing of loneliness
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation!!
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Thanks a lot for your kind words of appreciation!!
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Reblogged this on yogalightsite.
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Thank you so much for reblogging my post!!
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I like it
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Thanks AJ
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You write beautifully. Quite rich vocabulary you have. Thanks for visiting my blog,:)
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Thank you so much Kaushal!!!
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You’re most welcome.:)
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I write and blog on Fetlife would you mind if I quote this on a journal piece I am working on?
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Do you want to quote my poem?If yes as long as my name is mentioned there..I have no issue
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It goes without saying dear lady
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Thank you so much!!! Do send me a copy of it once you publish it 🙂
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It will take awhile as I right to types of poetry and I want that one to be more mediative and respectful
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Ok!
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The poem conveys the message that sometimes there is a joy in loneliness…there is a bliss in solitude …which is true…a lovely poem !
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Thank u so much 🙂
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thats so interesting with a message
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Thank you so much 😊
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Is the person trying to fool her and she is trying to find happiness even in that fake love?
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Yes …kind of..she is trying to search for some answer in the dark which the person is not ready to give easily ..and she is still finding happiness in this fake feeling
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