Look into the deep dark eyes and try,
These are friends who will never lie;
The words that dance on lips mislead,
But ‘the black browns’ will always lead;
If the heart is lost in the trap of yes- no,
They will wink and tell its “red ” or “go”;
Befriend ‘the secret givers’ of his or her,
They’ll always be ready with an answer;
The fake face will paint a different story,
But truth is revealed by the dark & ivory ;
Dive deep into ‘secretful’ abyss of ‘the spies’,
Playing hide and seek with the truth and lies..
Copyright 2015 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
this is really lovely…..am inspired to write..
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Thank you so much!! I am glad you liked it!!
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can’t believe i was so moved to like it again…lol
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Thanks again for the compliment!!
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you are welcome
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🙂
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Great job!
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Thank you so much!!
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Quite welcome and never a problem. Well done and great concepts/analogies you come up with. Awesome!
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Thank you so much!!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you so much for visiting my blog and for your commemt.
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Great couplets! 🙂
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Thanks a lot for your genuine appreciation!!
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You are welcome! 🙂
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🙂
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Quite poetic
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Thanks a lot!
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Very lovely poem…my eyes too spies…spies on this beautiful world !
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Thank you so much..I was waiting for your comment!! 🙂
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Thanks for sharing with us your poetic thoughts !
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It’s my pleasure when there are genuine appreciators and connoisseurs like u!
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Thanks for the early likes Chitkala!.. Glad to meet a another Mechie!!
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Cheers!!!
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Cheers too!
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Happy New Year….the miracle of this world is the beauty of some of the people in it…:-)
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Yes very true!!same to you!!
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Good one, keep writing
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Superbly written as always 🙂
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Thank you Amit!!!!
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Awesome One!!
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Thank you sahil
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Looking into the eyes can help you understand what they actually are!
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Very true!
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Feelings hiding behind eyes and face are often portrayed by many poets and authors! But, this one is different from league. Very well written!
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Thank you soo much
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This is an intriguing analogy, well entertained by your words. Enjoyed ❤️
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Thank you soo much
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Fantastic poem. So true. Love it.
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Thank you soo much
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Its a poem with life lesson.i loved it so much.😊
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Thank you soo much
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