Move on

January 12, 2016February 16, 2020 Chitkala Aditosh (Chitkala Mulye)

The warmth of the bed holds me there
But I leave those mushy dreams there

Twinkling nights intoxicating fire flies
Embracing sunshine losing moony ties,

Getting drenched in the rain so wet,
Bidding rain ‘good bye’ I don’t wait;

Seasons of life change their colors fast,
I enjoy ‘today’ forgetting the ‘passed’ past;

Butterfly flying from one flower to other,
Relishing the nectar of ‘today’s flower’;

Not looking behind, the water stream races,
‘Moving on’ not looking at the path it traces..

22 thoughts on “Move on”

CHETAN says:

January 12, 2016 at 11:25 am

nice poem , enjoy ‘today’ forgetting the ‘passed’ donot leave all dreams there because some dreams are turning into reality

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  January 12, 2016 at 4:46 pm
  
  Very true!!
  
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jacques818 says:

January 13, 2016 at 1:56 pm

Love this! So much!

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  January 13, 2016 at 2:25 pm
  
  Thanks a lot!!
  
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  1. jacques818 says:
    
    January 13, 2016 at 2:28 pm
    
    You’re welcome 🙂
    
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Asm Kamruzzahan says:

January 14, 2016 at 1:54 am

Marvelous poem…well done…past should not intoxicate…march forward !

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  January 14, 2016 at 2:56 am
  
  Thanks a lot!!
  
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moonskittles says:

January 15, 2016 at 7:45 am

Moving on because it is first for us.. a beautiful piece Chitkala!

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  January 15, 2016 at 9:55 am
  
  Thanks a lot!!
  
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helvetiadigital says:

January 15, 2016 at 2:10 pm

Hello Chetan

I liked this

Have you ever published anything?
Would you like it to be translated to spanish? No cost at all! And be shared with spanish readers?

Let me know!

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  January 16, 2016 at 9:51 am
  
  I have published some poems in magazines. Yes I don’t mind! Go ahead! But ensure that my name is mentioned!!!!
  
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  1. helvetiadigital says:
    
    January 17, 2016 at 1:37 am
    
    Hi!
    
    You will be notified soon and you will choose the poem you would like to share!
    
    Of course your name will be on it! Thanks!
    
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  2. Chitkala says:
    
    January 17, 2016 at 10:28 am
    
    Thanks a lot!!
    
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imaginaryme99 says:

January 16, 2016 at 12:15 pm

Beautifully crafted!!

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  January 17, 2016 at 10:28 am
  
  Thanks a ton!!
  
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helvetiadigital says:

January 17, 2016 at 9:08 pm

Are you in the US? Canada?

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  January 18, 2016 at 11:22 am
  
  No I stay in india
  
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shreyakhetan says:

February 8, 2016 at 5:36 pm

There’s an amazing flow to your prose, loved it :))

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1. Chitkala says:
  
  February 9, 2016 at 12:38 am
  
  Thanks a lot
  
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  1. shreyakhetan says:
    
    February 9, 2016 at 1:37 am
    
    :))
    
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Rock Smith says:

October 6, 2017 at 2:41 pm

Great philosophy..one must never remain fixed up in any stage of life or even state of mind… moving om is the best gift we have got fron nature.

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1. Chitkala Aditosh (Chitkala Mulye) says:
  
  October 6, 2017 at 2:43 pm
  
  Thanks Rock!!..Your comments or so precious 😊😊
  
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