The mind gets ‘thoughtless’,
The dark sky gets cloudless;
‘Silence’ envelopes the jungle,
No sorrow left behind any longer;
The deep dark water is so still,
The heavy heart takes a ‘chill pill’;
‘Crowd less’ is the ‘red’ road,
In a long-lasting peaceful mode;
Attachment and aversion soon vanish,
Relishing cherishing in peace I flourish.
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
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I like the ending:)
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Thanks a lot!!
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Awesome one…
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Wonderful.
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In my opinion, the theme of the poem is that we find peace in solitude…which is very true…very lovely poem !
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Very rhythmic. Touches heart . Nice one
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Thank you again 😊
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A good one..peace is very important in our life…pursuit of peace is more important than pursuit of happiness
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Thanks.😊
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