The line of grabbing opportunity,
Separates thoughts and reality;
The thought brushes the mind,
It’s the reflection of ‘your kind’;
The mirror shows thinking pattern,
And not the story of your ‘action’;
Don’t deceive by what you ‘do’,
What you ‘think’ is actually true;
You hide secretly deep inside,
The mask one day would slide;
Your action will always prove you pure,
It won’t deceive your heart for sure!!
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
Don’t deceive by what you do
What you think is actually true
Loved this. It’s like “i think, therefore I am”
Great poem!
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Yes you are right!! Thanks a lot 🙂
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Beautiful Chitkala…Keep it up!
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Beautiful !!!
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Thanks a ton!!
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Chitkal, it’s a well crafted poem and i’m sure, there is anything else that has to slide… your talent has to expose… keep it up! 🙂
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Thank you so much for your words of praise 🙂
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Ur welcm 🙂
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Very meaningful poem…we always dream for ideal world in our thoughts…we dream for an Eutopia…one can’t always live by the ideal theory of life…because the winding paths of life is very treacherous…in order to deal with reality, sometimes we have to compromise with reasonable limit…moderation or compromise is needed for many aspect of life…Besides to err is human…we grow through trial and error… the aspiration of the poem is my aspiration too…but an ideal world or system exists only in paradise or in poetry …very lovely and ideal poem…
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Thank you so much!!Your words are equally ideal.I totally agree!!!Thank you for your sincere comment 🙂
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Very enjoyable in its meaning! Thank you.
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Thanks a lot
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you 🙂
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Wow piece.
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I am glad ,you liked it!!!
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Really awesome 🙂 Very profound indeed.
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Humble thanks you 🙂
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Thank you for visiting my blog! I like this poem 😀
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Thanks and welcome 😊
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Deep and thought provoking. Great work Chitkala
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Thanks a lot.. I am glad you found it that way..:)
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love reading your lines… you are worth following
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My humble thanks to u 🙂
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👌 Beautiful
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My humble and sincere Thankd again 🙂
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*thanks
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It is very difficult to dig the truth through the wall of deceptive faces.
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Exactly!
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“Your action will always prove you pure,
It won’t deceive your heart for sure!!” ❤️
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Yuppp
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