The sun slept behind the mountains snow clad,
And “we” inside the blanket of love in the warmth it had,
The night dazzled with stars brighter than the sun,
Under the twinkling dark umbrella
we two were one,
Journey of togetherness, understanding that lived so long,
A fresh start with the cherished evergreen charm,
Walking hand in hand with memories sweet,spicy & sour,
Eyes brimmed with contentment & urge to explore more,
Life changing its color from “you- me ” to the forever “we”,
Intertwined, intermingled for ages! The world will see,
Scenting and coloring in love will take us a way long,
Enriching in the co-life giving birth to a mellifluous song..
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
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wow!!!your poem my time here worth it…You’re a rare poet…
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My humble thanks for such a great compliment from you 🙂
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lol….I also run a poetry blog-SMARTCULTURE,you can check it out @ smart2victor.wordpress.com.I look forward to your response..Thank you
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Very poetically written..
chris
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Thank you Chris 🙂
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Nice art…felt your feelings
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Walking hand in hand with memories sweet,spicy & sour,
Eyes brimmed with contentment & urge to explore more,
Wow what line! I love this
Nice poet
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Thank you so much 😀
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I get the vibe of peace that is around you…gentleness- don’t get me wrong you have fire- but your writing is smooth…
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This is eternal beauty. Your words create a beautiful symphony as I read them silently. Poignant indeed.
Here’s hoping you’ll visit my blog too at https://thewhimsicalandwanderingsoul.wordpress.com/
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Thank you so much for your genuine words 🙂
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Pleasure is mine. 🙂
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Loved your style of writing too..but I am unable to like amd comment..there is some problem..:(
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i enjoyed this poem as a song of a life
i like , ” Life changing its color from “you- me ” to the forever “we”,
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Thank u so much
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Just beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Beautiful poem; especially the first part about the mountains and the stars. Thanks for liking my post!
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Thanks a lot
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Beautifully written…:)
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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So romantic…The person whom you will love will be the luckiest guy ever
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Thanks a lot😊😊😊
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