It was a morning so fresh and fine,
Colourful was it and bright sunshine;
I confronted a young gorgeous lady,
Whom I knew since she was a baby,
It had just been a few but long years,
Her sensitive smile turned into jeers,
Lines of innocence fading the child-like face
Bitter experience turmoil leaving its trace,
Painted beauty,enchanting eyesand lips red rosy,
Digesting tough times with demeanor so posy,
Silence empowering diminishing serenity,
Shrewd moves dressed exquisitely pretty,
I felt that vast difference in me and her,
How twists and turns change the pure.
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
So true…. How Life Changes…. Thanks for liking my post…hence my being here. I find your posts fascinating…..OK if I ‘Follow’? Hugs!
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That was very humble of you..thank you so much…your posts are equally fascinating…thank yoh for your visit and appreciation 🙂
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Beautifully composed ..hope to see more such lines
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Thank you for your genuine words…
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Beautiful simply beautiful💕
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Thank you so much :)💐
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This is beautiful and a good definition of a poem with poetic qualities. I can proudly call you a poet after reading this. Thanks Chitkala. It’s nice to meet you. I can’t wait to read more of your work.
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Thanks a lot for this huge and genuine compliment!I post one poem every week and there are almost 38 poems on my blog 🙂
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You are welcome. I will check them out. 🙂
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🙂
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It was fun reading those titillating lines, the last two lines pierced my heart with the truth… thanks
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I am overwhelmed by your genuine words
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Striking illustration and imagery! Your Ugly beauty poem recalled a passage I read this
week in Truman Capote’s Breakfast at Tiffany’s: “She was a triumph over ugliness, so often more beguiling than real beauty, if only because it contains paradox.”
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Thanks a Lot…i am glad u liked it
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Am short of words!! Thanks for sharing your great poems!!
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That is your humbleness!I am glad you liked it 🙂
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Your poetry seems to very finer & naked . Beautiful poems
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Wicked world destroys the innocense in good people.Well said Chitkala
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Thanks Mr. Robertson
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I really enjoyed the way you articulated your thoughts. The flow of emotions in the form of a consistent rhyme was delightful to say the least. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful post! According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them. 😊🙏
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Thank you soo much Siddharth ☺️☺️
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