The dusted soil settles down,
Spreads the petrichor around;
The hurricanes of mind leave no pain,
Calms the mind lake with sultry rain;
Rhythmic breathes breeze the body,
Peeps the sun from the sky black cloudy;
The red petals stretch wide from ear to ear,
Willingly spontaneously with no trace of fear;
The energy rays gush through the sapless soul,
Turning the shattered magically into a whole.
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
This is beautiful, truly so. A real connection to being and knowledge of its relationship to natural life. Lovely to wake up to.
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Thank you so much!!Loved the way you interpreted it!
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Stunning words!
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My humble thanks to you
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Good one, Chitkala!
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Thanks a Lot…
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it’s a pleasure!
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Nice analogy
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Nicely said….
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Thanks a lot
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Welcome
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much !
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Love this!!
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Thank you so much
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🙂
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Amazing thoughts 🙂
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Thanks a lot ..😊
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welcome 🙂
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😊
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Reblogged this on unstilledheart.
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Thanks a lot😊
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You’re very welcome:)
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🙂
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This is indeed very nicely written…….how I miss the rhyming poems…….
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Thanks a lot…for your genuine appreciation..
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You writing just flows. Quite strange reading it and feeling like your on a ship. Ps your pics are amazing.
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Thanks a lot …😊you liked it..m so glad..,
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Great poetry. Love this! 🙂
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Thanks a lot
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This is amazing !
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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So is it the petrichor of your tears?
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Yes that’s right.
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I can resonate with the last verse. Sometimes life breaks us in such a way that we become unbreakable 😊. It’s at such juncture of life when our trembling tragedies can either destroy us or can ignite our evolution. Thanks for sharing such a meaningful post! Love the consistency of your rhymes. ✌️👌👍
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Thank you so much.. for your in depth appreciation
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