The magic of the moon is so evident,
The beauty spots making it exuberant;
The gold glitters when raw and pure,
Jewellery dazzles when made impure;
Sweet, soft , & serene will always suffer,
Unless it takes up a tough thorny cover;
Clean true & right cannot survive,
But a trace of wrong helps it thrive;
Nature reveals secrets to flourish in perils,
Walking hand in hand with the good & evils!!
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
Wow! Brilliant!
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Thanks a lot
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Excellent poetry.
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Thanks a lot
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Artistically portrayed. Nicely written. ๐
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Thank you so much for your words of appreciation
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You are welcome. ๐
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Superb Chitkala!! Beautifully drafted..
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Thanks dear
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Very intense expression. Especially the second stanza is haunting and yea, great effort
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Thank you so much for your genuine words of appreciation!
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Impressive :’)
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Thank u so much
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๐
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I don’t know which part I like more
“Sweet, soft , & serene will always suffer,
Unless it takes up a tough thorny cover;” or
“Clean true & right cannot survive,
But a trace of wrong helps it thrive;”
I like the sinister feel of “But a trace of wrong helps it thrive”
I love it all!
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Ooo dear thank you soo much…i am glad you liked it ๐
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Breathtaking pearls of thought !…what an insightful poem !
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Thank u sooooo much!!!
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Survival of the fittest! Darwin’s theory poetically penned
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Thanks Mr.Jack
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Love this poem. I particularly like the lines –
โSweet, soft , & serene will always suffer,
Unless it takes up a tough thorny cover;โ
Sometime it has that little evil edge to it and other times, for me, it is a parent talking to a child who is maybe bullied at school. Very nice piece of writing, thanks for sharing ๐
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Thanks Andyโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ
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