Still searching for the pleasing green,
Satisfying my eyes with the view serene,
Lost is it in the smoke & screeching traffic,
The world so materialistic!I can’t live in it,
The home-my sanctuary of life is far away,
I try to reach it, but back I helplessly stay,
The horns of vehicles ‘ whine’ to embrace me,
But the twitter of birds my ears wish to ‘see’,
Ties tied tight never easily give away,
In the dreams of green womb i stay…
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
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This is wonderful.
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thanks a lot
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Really like how you write. It’s simple and refreshing. Also thank you for liking my post. Most encouraging to be appreciated by a fellow poet:-).
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thank u so much..ur is equally catchy š
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I like it! Green is good! š
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Thank u š
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I really like this one. And… green is my favourite colour.
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Thank u so much
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Hey Chitkala, You write well, your feelings are genuine. I feel the words.. Thanks
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I am glad you liked it Mayank..thanks a lot for ur compliment
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Beautiful work
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Thanks a lot š
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What a lovely and insightful poem !…”The world so materialistic!I can’t live in it,…” I feel the same way. Thanks for sharing your pearls of thought !
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Thank you so much!!!I feel happy your comments are back on my blog again:)
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I really like the phasing in this.
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Thank you so much..I am glad you liked it !!
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And in springtime when all is green again!
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Show me how beautifully you feel the other colours
Green Is Great
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Thank you so much š
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It is very natural for an artist to crave for green.
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Nature motivates an artist!
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