Lips are sealed ,eyes are closed,
She calms herself staying composed;
She swallows the moments with ease,
With a smiling face saying “cheese” ,
The breath is caught and trapped there-in,
Struggling to come out in the free world clean;
Simmering hurt feelings on mute mode,
Walking on the same rough empty road;
No words to say no tears to fall out,
Just a frozen smile and a fake pout..
Copyright 2016 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
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just like a picture/portrait captured with false emotion that stays for a long time. Nice composition. π
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Thanks a lot π
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just like a picture/portrait captured with no definite emotion that stays frozen through time. Beautifully written π
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Thank you so much
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so beautiful!
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Thank you so much
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Beautifully written her pain and the mask she carries..
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Thank u so much
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This is wonderful and so are you!! π
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Thank you
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Excellent!
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Thank you
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Really nice.
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Thanks for your compliment
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Beautifully depicted!!!
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Thank u so much
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Chilling.
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Beautiful!
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I like your mastery of couplets. The message of the poem is easily driven home with the resounding patterns.
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Thanks again !!!!
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Romanticism though decadent is beautifully manifested in your poem.
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Beautifully expressed
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Thank you so much
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Your poems are reflection of your emotions…No wonder they carry words, coming straight from your heart filled with emotions, as your intro says!!
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Thanks a lot for your comments
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You’re welcome π
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