The bright sun refused to rise,
Sending night to refresh the ties;
The dark clouds peeped down ,
On the tired,dark and lonely town;
In the crowd, I was alone,
Cold silence without a moan;
Searching for a surprise in the dark,
Waiting for message of the singing lark ;
Eyes stuck to the waiting window ,
Heart beats slow and heart sunk low ;
Rebellious thoughts hovering on mind,
Missed moments difficult to find;
Struggling thoughts to reach an end,
Taking efforts on mistakes to mend;
Spending days months years and births,
To seek warmth and wanted mirth;
Feelings racing to play and win,
For the game of innocence versus sin!
-Chitkala
Good as ever. Beautiful write
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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“…innocence vs sin.” Which one do i want? Id say both, coz i will be aware what is happening at the moment and see where i will be standing on.
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Hmm..true
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you
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Absolutely beautiful! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my poem “The Greatest Quest”. Will you follow my blog, Chitkala?
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Yes sure…thank you so much 😊
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You’re very welcome! I’m just now in the process of building up my blog. Any tips?
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Good!All the best to u
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Hey Nice Poem! 🙂 Liked it
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Thank you so much
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There is real imagery in all your verse. Very nice stuff!
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Thank you sooo much…for this compliment
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rhymes
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🙂
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yeah yeah
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😊😊
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Love this!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful. I like the rhyming couplets and the rhythms that flow in them. The imageries used are very perfect, and one can easily feel the liveliness of the poem. Nice one, Chitkala
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Thank u so much…I am glad u liked it 🙂
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I don’t write as good as you , but my first poem was published when I was 8 , 56 years ago : Sleep , which forms part of my Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara .
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Oh!!That’s very impressive..I will try to get your book soon👍
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Lovely
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Thank you
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You write beautifully… Would love to have your views on my work
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Sure:)
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I am enjoying reading your poems….Another lovely poem from a talented poet….Great work Chitkala
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Thank you soo much 🙂
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I felt connected to your poems! They somewhere reflected my style of thinking and pouring emotions through words. God Bless!
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Oooo I am overwhelmed 😉
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🙂
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rebellious thoughts hovering on mind
this poem has made me blind , to many things left behind
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Ooo..Wowww what a rhyme!!!
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the game of innocence vs. sin through GODS powers you will always win
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Thank you for your grand attention to my work!
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You are always welcome :)You write very well!!All the best to you
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Thanks for visiting and liking Inconsolable.
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Can there be life without sins……
Sins can also be blissful, thanks Chitakal
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🙂
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