The beautiful face shone so bright,
Casting its shadow in the midnight;
She dressed in sweetness diabetic,
Evil hidden inside the image exotic;
She cast her spell with her magic black,
Singing a song sweeter than a lark;
Soon she removed the mask so false,
Reached the roof climbing the walls;
The shocked horrified the innocent heart,
She took a knife and broke it apart;
She rose to the sky with a lightening stroke,
It rained blood when she cut her throat;
The wicked won over the pure and clean,
The worst ever defeat the world had seen..
-Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
This was a different topic than you usually choose but I could make out your signature of contradictions. Good one… one can almost visualize the unraveling of the mask.
On 04-Mar-2017 3:27 PM, “The words untrammelled..” wrote:
> Chitkala posted: “The beautiful face shone so bright, Casting its shadow > in the midnight; She dressed in sweetness diabetic, Evil hidden inside the > image exotic; She cast her spell with her magic black, Singing a song > sweeter than a lark; Soon she removed the mask so” >
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Thanks for your visit to “The words untrammelled”. I have always related fairy tales in a very different way and they always have a hidden story ling under the lines. So just thought of using the same theme!
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a bit more story -line…
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Dark and Gory.
Keep it up!
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Thanks๐๐
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When I saw the word “Beauty” I thought this was going to be about you!
Thanks for the “Like” on my Poem.
I hope you will visit again.
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Yes but the theme turned out to be very different! Thanks ๐
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Looks like a fairy tale.. Excellent use of figures of speech!!
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Thank you soo much!!
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