My heart full of love,
Flew to the sky,
To search a cloud full of dreams,
On the cloud to cuddle,
Cherish the feelings subtle,
But broke down,
To droplets of water,
Becoming tears in my eyes..
-Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
My heart full of love,
Flew to the sky,
To search a cloud full of dreams,
On the cloud to cuddle,
Cherish the feelings subtle,
But broke down,
To droplets of water,
Becoming tears in my eyes..
-Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh
Beautiful poetry..
Shreyans
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https://shreyanssite.wordpress.com/2017/04/07/my-first-book-is-live/
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So touching!! Love it.
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Pretty β€
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Happy you stopped by Chitkala..
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You are a great writer. Keep spreading theβ magic.πβ€
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Thanks a lot Tanushree loved your writing too!!
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Beautiful easy words. You have beautiful poetry.
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wow beautiful…
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Beautiful…
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Thanks a lot ππ
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Hey Chitkala! Thanks for stopping by my site! I enjoyed reading through some of your poems! I really like the idea of tears as rain in this one. Keep writing! =)
Jen
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Thanks Jen! Loved ur blog tooπ
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This one touched my heart and made me realize how much I have to learn of life and how much I have
to grow as a person before I go beyond the clouds.
Warmly,
Ron
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Thank you so much… π
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Soul unburdened
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Unusual and unique metaphors..
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Thamks Brad!!
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Lovely!
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