You were born free,
They chained you,
They easily caged you;
But your legs were free,
So you felt obliged,
Though your hands were tied,
Huh! You call it free?
So happy you were!
For the little freedom there?
They shrugged it off!
Their true responsibility,
Such a pity!
Freedom is responsibility,
They could not teach you,
And thus they imprisoned you!
Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
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Very thought provoking Chitkala, well written!
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Thank you so much!!
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Very beautiful thought by amazing soul.
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Thank you so much…genuine comment by a genuine reader!!
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Hi Chitkala…
You are ..So adorable in your writing….I need to appreciate your innocence…
I am glad connecting with you as blogger
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Thanks a lot!!!
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You’re are beautiful soul.
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We’re only chained if we allow it.
Beautiful piece.
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Thank you soo much!!
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Beautiful!
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Thanks!
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Thanks so much for the follow and for being passionate about equality and cultural acceptance.
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🙂
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Beautiful thoughts… 🙂
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Thanks!!
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Well done, Chitkala. Thank you for following ThusNSuch.
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Thanks a lot!!
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thank you for ‘liking’ my poem and introducing me to yours.
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You are welcome!
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This is so profound! Very good choice of words!
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Thank u so much 🙂
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Thanks a lot!!
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Beautiful piece of poetry.
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Thanks a lot!!
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Be free Chitkala! Your words are slowly removing each link of the chains that bind you and so many others. Thank you for sharing your heart. xoxo
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Thanks for your wonderful words!!
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Cheers to Freedom…its ur right!
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😊
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