My little emotion decided to leave me,
To walk to the doorstep of your heart,
It waited for a very long time there,
‘You will make it yours’, it thought;
It knocked and you opened the door,
It spread its arms and waved at you,
Singing and dancing looking into your eyes,
Meeting you, was it’s dream come true;
But, you did not notice the tiny one,
You badly ignored the poor thing dear,
It returned to me getting disappointed,
And jumped out of my eyes becoming a tear.
Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye ( Chitkala Aditosh)
Good one. The personification of emotion, especially probably some subtle but important one, makes one realize their importance when put forth like this.
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It is just not personification…it has a hidden transferred epithet..
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Just a wow…
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Thanks a lot!!
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One suggestion, your page theme is static and doesnt show your posts until one drags it down. Chk for any change in settings if available. friendly suggestion š
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Oh… thanks…suggestion taken!! Will try to find a better theme š
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I identify with your comments. In the ‘real’ world under my real name, I hold a Master’s degree a Post- Graduate Diploma and a Bachelor’s degree and a teaching qualification. None of them have made me rich, quite the opposite, in fact. Under my pseudonym, under this seminal blog (and my seminal Facebook page), I am, however, enriched because my true vocation is writing (even though, for the time being, I have earned nothing from it). It a craft to be developed and improved upon, perpetually, and through my writing I express my freedom. Thank you, Chitkala, for following my page. I look forward to reading more of your posts. RC Clermont.
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Thank you so much for visiting my blog!!! āŗāŗāŗ
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This is so powerful
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Thank you so much!!
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Oh, i know that feeling š¦
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Thanks for the ‘Follow’!!! š
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Spreading my arms and waving at you also, thank you for the follow look forward to checking in with your posts and clicking the follow button.
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well put. Love it.
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Thanks John!
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This touched my heart! Beautiful, but a sad truth.
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Hmmmm āŗāŗāŗ
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Thanks a lot… I am glad u liked it!
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You write beautifully. I would suggest you select another theme, as well. The appearance of your theme is lovely, meaning your color selection etc. Perhaps, a theme with a different layout will do your work more justice.
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