That one moment in life,
Changes everything right?
Like that bright spot,
On the canvas of life,
Painted by the time,
Leaving a memory,
That freezes you there,
Lighting up your life,
On the swing of time.
Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye
That one moment in life,
Changes everything right?
Like that bright spot,
On the canvas of life,
Painted by the time,
Leaving a memory,
That freezes you there,
Lighting up your life,
On the swing of time.
Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye
Nice..
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Thanks Ketaki!
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Most welcome creative writer!!π
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yes.I have been waiting for that moment
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All the best to you…may it come sooner..
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thank u
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this is good!
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βΊThanks Jim!
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Yes that one moment can change your life entirely. Thanks for your beautiful thoughts π β€
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Thanks for your comment!!
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Nicely written!
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Thanks a lot Arianna!!
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You’re very welcome. π
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I loved reading this,
Homage to u mam….
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Thank you Anuragh… I am gladβ you liked it!!
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Any external social links?
I want to contact u..
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Yes..connect me to Chitkala Mulye on likedin and Facebook, and chitkaladitosh on Twitter
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Soon I’ll be contacting you.πππ
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You can also like my Facebook page ..the words untrammelled
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Surely..
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Thank you for your visit to my blog today. This is a great poem!
Nancilynn
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Thanks Nancilyn!!
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Beautiful poem, Chitkala.
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Thanks Wallace Peach!!
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I can relate with this!! Story of many
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True!
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Beautifully captured, that one moment
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Thanks!!
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Hey, thanks for liking my post. Means a lot to me.
You write really well. Great choice of words, one could immediately feel the connection.
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Thanks a lot Urvashi…its my pleasure!
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Wow
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Loved that one, Chitkala. Liked the clarity and the pacing. Lovely poem.
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Thanks a lot π
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Deceptively simple, Chitkala, until you get to the last four lines:
Leaving a memory,
That freezes you there,
Lighting up your life,
On the swing of time.
The “swing of time” ties together the other images, capturing the “springtime” feel of your poem. Ah, a fellow Romantic.
By the way, thank you for reading my “Sins of the Grandfather” play in free-verse. I think you’ll enjoy the concluding scene, tomorrow.
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Thank you so much!!! I am glad you left such a lovely comment.. thanks for your sincere appreciation! Keep in touch ππ
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Beautiful!
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Beautifully penned. Thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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This is something that we all take for granted. Each moment only ever happens once in all eternity! Thinking of it in that way will make you want to cherish each and every one! Nice writing!
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Oh!!!Great thought .you are right …this can really help to overcome sorrow
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To me, the essence of living in the present is seeing the starlight from some distant star and reflecting on that light gracing oneβs retina in that very instant! Whoops! Got carried away. For my purpose of coming here was to pass on my thanks for your recent decision to follow Learning from Dogs! Thank you!!
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Thank u sooo much…good thought!!
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Such moments charm up our lives..
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π
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Loved it
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Thanks ππ
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