The breeze gushed through the waiting window,
Rejuvenating and relaxing me from head to toe;
It brought back those misty memories with you,
That had vanished before the morning dew,
The tiresome, tough day had departed somehow,
Enigmatic evening was dark and tranquil now;
Like the bright silent moon in the starry sky,
Your thoughts, my warm heart began to spy;
Taking me to the most awaited dream world,
I lay silently on my bed, with my body curled;
The misty memories moved in front of my eyes,
Enlivening my lost soul and the old, dry, ties;
I strolled in my dreamy dreams thinking of you,
Dreams got wet with the morning drizzling dew;
The sun opened my eyes and I searched for you,
But I was all alone and there was no sign of you;
I wished the evening breeze would come again,
And those misty memories, the nights would rain.
Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
Yo! Beautiful poem
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Thank you so much Sam!
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An impressive poem. This is the best one of yours so far.
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Thanks a lot!!! π
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beautifully moving
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Thanks πππ
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Beautiful poem… Expressive
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Thank you Gourav !!
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Most welcome ππ
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“I wished the evening breeze would come again, And those mists memories, the nights would rain.” This is splendid! Love itβ€.
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Hey thanks for liking my post! Your poem is beautiful! I love the line ‘strolled in my dreamy dreams’ π
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Thank you… I loved your blog nameπΌ
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Peter Dew
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Is it your name??
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Very romantic, loved it
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Beautiful! β€
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Thanks… keep visiting
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Beautiful words
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Thank you!!!
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Beautiful words. Some sad and moving too. Memories of the past gone by ! Love and Light from me π β€
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Oh….so eloquent…loved ur words…love and light from me too!
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Excellent – Brava!
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Stunning imagery, beautifully crafted poem. Anand Bose from Kerala
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So romantic and rhythmicπ
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Thanks Sam
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ce poem – pensive, wistful. thanks for the follow BTW π
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Thanks a lottttt!!!
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Very metaphoric and very pretty. Thank you!
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Thanks a ton!!!!!!!!
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Exquisite!
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Thanks a lott!!
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