Drowning in the deep pool of pain,
Tears vanished in the shower of rain,
The skies whispered and the trees whimpered,
Telling me, you will never be back again;
My vulnerable heart and feelings insane,
Living life so charmless and mundane,
The wind blew shaking me again,
Telling me, you will never be back again..
Copyright 2017 Chitkala Aditosh ( Chitkala Mulye)
This is beautiful.
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beautiful …a great pleasure to read
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Thanks a lott!
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There is so much of this type of encounter, in life. Treasure what is.
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Thanks for stopping and liking my post!
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You are welcome π
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Enchanting Chitkala. π
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Thanks ππ
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A beautiful piece of poem you got there. Hope you find consonance in my poems too.
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Yes….will check out urs
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Thanks βΊβΊ
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Powerful hands…deep message. I was going to write something on this same concept only that it won’t be a poem.
Great poem.
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Hehe…thanks. yes…sometimes the best tool to give a powerful message is simple and lucid words
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Gospel
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Outstanding
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Thank u soo muchππ
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Your welcome! I look forward to reading more from you π
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Thanks a lotππ€
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Yeah she will never be back again πͺπ₯π’π’
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Want to make a song with lyrics like that β€ Reading this I can feel.
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Ooo…. that’s so sweet of u!
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this is so true
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