The breeze blew,
The leaves flew,
I softly confessed,
That I love you;
The leaves knew,
The breeze knew,
That I wanted to,
Be one with you;
But my thoughts fought,
My emotions thought,
And that was why,
My feelings got blocked;
Then the breeze stopped,
The hurt heart stopped,
Because he bluntly said,
Thar I do not and will not.
Copyright 2017 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
Ooh wow very lovely
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Thanks a lot
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welcome Chitkala
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😊
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I liked everything about this one, not to mention the twist in the end.
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Thanks a lott
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Love felt in one’s heart is what needs to be cherished and loved, not the love that was not received.
I love this. Very emotional and realistic. 😘
💛💜💙💚❤
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Yes….
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Awww, too bad 😦
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😊
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Very well written 😊
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😊😊😊
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Very sweet, and sad when a tender moment turns sour.
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Yaaa😒
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Hello Chitkala! Thank you for dropping by and following my blog. I hope you have enjoyed your visit, I enjoyed your work a lot. I look forward to seeing you more often on my page so we can know each other a little better. I hope you can introduce my pages http://www.shikhachandel.com to your readers. I will do the same so we can grow more and spread more magic in our blogging community. Good to have you on my list.
Best Wishes!
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Same here!!! I enjoyed the visit! All the best to you😊
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👍
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I love your way of thinking, yes, I would like to stay in contact with you. Thank you for following me and liking my blogs
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Thanks a lot… I would love to stay in touch with you too.. please contact me on Facebook..my user name is Chitkala Mulye and my contact number is on my blog.
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🤗
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Aw sad. Do you have an account at Allpoetry?
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No..what is it
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Where you can put you poetry and join contest. You may won trophies, ribbon or sometimes depends who conduct the contest money. It’s fun there. You got to see other people’s poetry… you can check mine https://allpoetry.com/HeadsIntheCloud
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Or just type them in google and join.. 🙂
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Okok
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Ok
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And it’s challenging to join contest or make your poem on the spot depends on the theme…
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Ok. Can you give me the link
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https://allpoetry.com
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