तेरे आखोंने मुझसे जो वादा किया था,
वो तेरे ज़ुबाँने क्यूँ तोड दिया?
इस दिलकी सच्चे महोब्बत को
तूने यूँही झुटलादिया.
तेरे दिल ने मुझसे जो इकरार किया था,
उसेे तू क्यूँ मुकर गया,
ऐसे करते करते इस वफा को बेवफा कर गया,
तेरे धडकन ने मुझसे जो बात कहीं वो तू कैसे भूल गया?
हमदर्द को दर्द देके खुद बेदर्द क्यूँ हो गया?
प्यार ने प्यार से जो इकरार किया उससे भी ठुकरा दिया,
इस तरह मुँह मोडके तूने अपने को पराया बना दिया.
Copyright 2018 Chitkala Mulye ( Chitkala Aditosh)
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Will try to post an English version soon
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Glad I could capture feelings of readers like you!!
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Mam , please go through my poem also …and give me some valuable suggestions
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Hi, great poem. I think you used English to Hindi typing tool. I can write it in Hindi in Unicode. If you like.
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बहुत सुन्दर
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