The gentle wind playing with my hair,
Tangling them with a naughty dare;
Untied, loose, free, running astray,
Making thoughts crazy and feelings sway;
Again that gush and a very big blow,
Melting emotions and letting them flow;
A mellow touch with a lively breeze,
Warming me up and making me freeze;
Bringing sensual showers wet and warm,
Blushing me red in his rough love storm;
Bathing me in sunshine, lighting up my eyes,
His blithe some tries knitting new ties.
Copyright 2018 Chitkala Mulye
That is such a beautiful poem: it really made me think and wonder, in the same way most poems and songs do – but this was truly amazing. Great post!
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Thank u soo much!!!
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Aww no problem! Honestly it was my pleasure π
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Hello from Chicago , Usa πΊπΈ. Thats a good one βοΈ
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Thanks a lottt
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Loved it!
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Glad you liked π
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wow…very nice.:) mood maker in this rainy season to come π
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Thank u so much
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That was beautiful and full of so many meanings! On a simple note, I love woman’s hairs blowing in the wind…
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Amazing!
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Very nice, poem
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Thanks
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Hello chitkala, thanks for following my blog. I have followed thou back. The poem is very well written. I too wrote such a poem, titled ” The wind and I”. You should check it. π
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Oh sureeeee.. why not..!! Thanks a ton!
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You are welcomed π
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Thank you for sharing your poem with us. I do not know how to review poems, but I find interesting to read what you write. Beautiful. Much Love and Light from me π β€
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Thank you soo much… Love and light to you too!!
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Beautiful… and a beautiful woman if you don’t mind me saying
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Thank u so much for your kind and affectionate words!!
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I read very little poetry but I’m glad I dropped by. I really enjoyed that. I like your page title. Only just this weekend I watched an old episode of ‘Out of Town’ where the legendary Jack Hargreaves waxed lyrical on the subject of fishing with a trammel net, and how the word entered our language.
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Thank u so soo much for your appreciation!!!
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Brilliantly written.
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