I lit a flame of hope in my heart,
To spread the optimism in the dark;
It was bright, bold and beautiful,
My dull, lull life was so delightful;
The flame soon turned into a fire,
The fire of expectations and desire,
The urge to have more and more,
Burning the heart with the scars sore;
It hurt the heart with disillusionment,
Burning to ashes that serene sentiment,
Then I learned that the flame must burn,
But, not expecting anything in return.
Copyright 2018 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
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I felt that 😊.
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Thanks! Glad I could capture those thoughts 🙂
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I also wrote about fire – more in my early blogs. It seems fire and I enjoy our dance. Although even fire and burning transmute eventually into something altogether different…
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Hehe…i love fire too
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Yeah
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😊😊
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This is great! You’ve presented the thought beautifully ❤️
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I am so thankful to u
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Amazing! it was a mix of emotions i felt while reading it.
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Thank you soo much!!!
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Amazing..😊
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Thank you so much!!
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Dear Chitkala: You have a beautiful blog! I nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award. Your participation is optional but if you would like to participate here is the link:
https://amiracarluccio.com/2018/10/31/thank-you-for-the-2nd-sunshine-blogger-award/
Congratulations dear friend and keep on spreading Light and inspiration! Sending light and love your way, Amira ❤
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Thank you!!
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Superb! very well written and expressed!Loved it!
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Ah yes, it’s the expectation that destroys.
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😊😊
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Amazing words.
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Thank you soo muchhhh
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With the fires in CA devastating so much of both northern and Southern California, this poem takes on an unintended meaning. Poignant!
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Thank you
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Wow! Mouth dropped open wow. I could feel your words inside my body. Mouth still open… lol
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Oooo….. that’s really sweet of you!!!!
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Really loved this piece….so beautiful. Thanks for liking my post and following my blog! I can’t wait to listen to more of your poetic voice!
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Thanks a lott!
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Beautiful. The truth of a generous heart. Thank you for visiting my blog!
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You are welcome..thanks for your appreciation
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Beautiful poem. The truth of a generous heart. Thank you for visiting my blog!
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I loved your poem so much the first time I read it. I told my parents about it. Shared it on FaaceBook and going to try and print. Just lovely! And powerful!
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I am so glad you loved it so much.. you can send me a request on facebook.. I would love to get connected with you 🙂
https://www.facebook.com/chitkaladitosh
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Very nicely written, no expectations, just burn. remembered word of Sadhguru reading this.
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Thank you soo much
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Thanks you cheered me up with this poem.
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Glad I did 🙂
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