Your eyes met mine and lit a bright spark,
Like the sudden lightning in the night dark;
Your elated eyes shone, giving me a bold jolt,
Striking a fire in us with a thunderbolt;
Your eyes touched mine giving a feeling divine,
Like the rain showers in a warm sunshine;
Your eyes held deep, my tender gaze for long,
My heart flew high singing a sweet song;
Your eyes spoke with mine about your love,
Liberating my waiting soul like a free dove.
Copyright 2018 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
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This is beautifully written. 😊
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Very nice reading – thank you.
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Thank you!!
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I like this, especially this line: “Your eyes spoke with mine about your love,” Thanks for checking out my site!
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation 😊😊
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Love the way you fabricate words to surreal twine. Keep up the good work.
P.S. Thanks for checking on my site. 😉
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Thank you soo much Kartik
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“Striking a fire in us with a thunderbolt”
Loved this line.
Who needs Thor’s hammer? 💖
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Thanks a lotttttt
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Very soothing, strong and to the point, ☮️
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Thank you again!!!!!
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Very memorable and so soothing and pure imagination, ☮️
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Thank you soooo much…. I appreciate your feedback
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Beautiful! You are gifted with words!
Thanks for stopping by and liking my posts!
Keep writing and blessing the world!
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Thank you sooo much!!!
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