(This is a symbolic poem based on the fairy tale ‘Beauty and the beast’ . It shows how love can cure the negatives in a person caused by the situations and conditions in life. No man is good or bad..the situations make him that way)
She knew the dark chambers of his heart,
She knew his million shades of grey,
She understood well the monster in him,
It was the fire with which she had to play;
He never revealed the real truth inside,
For he was scared to let her know,
He was sure she would abhor him then,
She was not ready for the very big blow;
His heart wasn’t wicked but his face ugly,
It was the game played by the destiny,
Trapping his goodness in a man so devil,
So horrible, disgusting and uncanny;
But she knew him and he didn’t know her,
She was the fairy who was there to free,
She kissed the beast making him hers,
Freeing him to embrace the magical glee;
The sincere unconditional love so true,
Determined to make him clean and pure,
Melting the dark sinful evil unholy,
Into an adorable, lovable heart forever.
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Awesome. Very well written
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Thanks a lottttt
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Love can do that for sure ……. beautiful
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sounds like my life, great poem
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Thank you sam
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Good work
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….millions of women worldwide fell prey to the illusion that they are beautiful princesses who are able to transform a beast to a loving man and partner….that their love will heal and fill the void within their insecure, emotional or even physical abusive, narcissistic and possessive men.
No you cannot change a grown-up man. A beast remains a beast. Your love won
t transform him. Leave him alone and go on with your life. You don
t need a man who is a beast / is not good for you, doesnt add any value to your life and consumes your life energy.
t like this fairy-tale message at all, to be honest.I don
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Well ..here the beast doesn’t mean someone who is violent. This is just a symbolic representation of how the good wins over the evil with goodness..Your words are certainly true however even such stories do exist.
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Of course, there are many interpretations possible. In psychology, fairy tales are often used to uncover unhealthy relationships and family constellations….maybe, I am a bit prestressed.
But it is great to exchange views. Thx for sharing.
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I agree with the point you made out about fairy tales. The only thing I want to emphasize is the immense power goodness in a person. This may seem impractical but is not impossible for sure.
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I agree with you kindness is so important – even the smallest gesture might “save the world”. In my view, you are able to give/share / forward only “things/experiences/emotions” that you have received.
If you never experienced kindness, chances that you won`t be able to be generous, emphatic and kind towatrds others are big.
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Yes… absolutely right…we usually pass on what we get and that is what shapes our nature..
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Google about Kiran Bedi ..a police officer from India who tried to create a difference in criminals..it was a successful experiment..this might be an example that even beasts can change!!!
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Yes, I know the concept. In Germany, jurisdiction and law enforcement is not about penalty only. The target is to re-socialize criminals to enable them to become a value-adding member of society again.
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Oh yes…that is what I am saying …people do change
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Personalities don`t change in most cases but if somebody is aware of his deficits, and is motivated, he can learn to control himself and manage his deficits in order not to hurt others or violate rules.
The behavior might change but not the person himself.
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May be…but you never know
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Lovelyβ¦such a beautiful descriptionπ€
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Thank you soo much!!
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Interesting slant.
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Outstanding chitu
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Thank you!!
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Most welcome
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Really great!
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Thanks a lot
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Thank you for sharing your work. Very inspiring.
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Than you for your appreciation!
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Read various posts from Your blog. Smart choice of words. The wordplay between the lines is wonderful in all Your posts that I have read so far. Have you considered writing a book with chapters comprising of your poems? I am asking this because I am writing a Novel and the characters within my story could be groomed with your talent. Let me know either way if You are interested or not. Good day to You!
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I am currently writing a biography. After it gets published I would publish another book of my poems…Thanks a lot for your words of praise…I am glad you liked my blogs
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That’s cool and exciting. Best wishes to both Your writings as well as Your future successful publications of the said writings. Looking forward to see them in book stores or as e-books. You are most welcome. Few years ago, I used to write short stories and poems for free for kindergarten students as a social cause and then You know, life catches up where your focus is required elsewhere. Waiting to write for little kids again. I am from India too. I should be addressing You as DiDiπ
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Woww…nice to know…keep up the good work!!!
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Thank You didi…Sure, will do! … if you wouldn’t mind, I’d like to stay connected through the contact from Gravatar, to seek your guidance or help with your writings and publications if any. I’d love to be part of your art journey.
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Cool, Thank You and Best Wishes on your future endeavours.
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Lucky are the ones who find their true love who understands and stand by them for what they are.
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Yes…they are
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What a lovely poetic retake on something as simple and classical as Beauty and the Beast! Thank you for sharing, and thank you for liking my post the other day.
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Beautiful!!!π
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Thank you soo much
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Ohh this is so simple and lovey!
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Thank you soo much
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Wow this is good
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Thank be you so much
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That is beautiful.
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Thank you so much !!
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Awesome! Great word play, I love it
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Thank you soo much!!!
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Lovely poem! Very well written
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Thank you soo much!!
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Loving your site. How you use words so amazing.
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Thank you so much…glad you liked it…keep reading ππ
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Your welcome and yes I will keep reading.
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Beautiful poem. Please go through my website and share your thoughts in the comments section. Iβd really appreciate your feedback. Hereβs the link:
https://rekhtiwrites.wordpress.com/
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Thank you so much for sharing your link…I will surely visit!
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Thanks a ton for respecting my request =)
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Very beautiful poem! Is perfect. Keep going like this!β
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Thank you soo much!!
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Awesome.very well.written.
M new to blogging.request u to check my posts and give your valuable input.would highly appreciate it.Thanks
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Thank you soo much…I will checkππ
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Thanks a lot dear
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You write on interesting topics.. keep it up
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nice one
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Thank u so much
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Very clever! Congrats!
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Wow! this is epic poetry in itself. My heart and feelings got spoken right there! Nice piece Chitkala.
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Glad you liked itπππ
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(This is a symbolic poem based on the fairy tale βBeauty and the beastβ . It shows how love can cure the negatives in a person caused by the situations and conditions in life. No man is good or bad..the situations make himΒ that way)
Lovely πππ€π€
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