You see my strength and not the pain,
You don’t see my loss but just my gain,
You see me smile and my happy face,
But the scars hidden, you may never trace,
My eyes are dry, now they dare not weep,
My hidden wounds lie in my heart so deep,
They have healed, but still bleed red today,
This dread red carried my innocense away,
I miss my serenity, I miss me naive,
But this was what once helped me survive,
How I wish I were so pure and clean,
But I lost my purity when I fought the mean,
I unveiled the truth taking the blood bad,
I bathed in this red though it drove me mad,
I fought for the right exposing the wrong,
Thus I won the battle standing rock strong.
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Powerful words from a young lady that overcame the labours and birth pains of life.
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No no…this not about a mother undergoing labour pain…Its about the fight for truth and fight with the evil in humans
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That is what I was saying. Lifes struggles are like birth pains it hurts then it passes strengthening ones resolve.
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Ooo…yess ofcourse..you right
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Beautifully put. Quite relatable.
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Thank you soo much
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Quite beautiful but strong one too. Loved it
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Thank you so much dear Richa
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You are always welcome β₯β₯β₯
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The poem is exquisite
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Thank you so much
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Emotionally expressed. Keep writing.
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Thank you so much!!
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Deep yet so simply put!
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Thank you soo much!!
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Great choice on the media photo, needless to say, but I will nonetheless- Powerful Work. God Bless.
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Thank you soo much!!
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“I have done my graduation in Mechanical Engineering and MBA in HR. However, my heart finds its way to the world of art. ” ~Chitkala Aditosh (Chitkala Mulye)
It is inevitable, how else will thy heart and soul dance? The mind cannot create Art, it can only perceive it. There is a river of infinte creativity flowing within us all, straight from the MASTERPIECE.
When we think, the river of creativity begins to trickle, the spirit of Eternity has no time or need to think, it simply flows as our minds follow. Art is born.
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I like it
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Nice poem
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Thank youπππ
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“I bathed in this red though it drove me mad” – such a defining line of your offering…..beautiful
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Thank you soo mucj
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Thank you soo much
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Deep β€οΈ
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Thank you so much!!π
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βI fought for the right exposing the wrong,/Thus I won the battle standing rock strong.β Great lines!!!
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Thank you so much!!!
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It was my pleasure, Chitkala.
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Thanks a lotttt
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So powerful
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Thank you soo much!!
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Beautiful. Relatable. Strong β₯οΈ
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Thank you soo much!!
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I love this! Itβs so relateable!
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Thank you soo much!!
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You wroteβ¦.How I wish I were so pure and clean,β¦to me, the only thing that can ever stop us from being pure and cleanβ¦are our own thoughtsβ¦.to me if i am having ANY kind of thoughts that are not pureβ¦those very thoughts will BLOCK the thoughts of all all that is pure and cleanβ¦.It was a nice articleβ¦
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Thank you soo much!!!
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this is everything.
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Yes ..your are right it is
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Thank youu
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Wow somehow poeticβ¦well doneπ
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Thank u soo much
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I’d be grateful if you can follow my page tooπ…humble plea
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I am somehow unable to subscribe more blogs…but will surely read and comment
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I will still try if I can later
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Wonderful poem. Don’t ever quit writing. You’ve been given a gift. Thank you for sharing it with us. And thank you for following me recently. I look forward to our virtual walk together.
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Thank you so much…πππ
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Could you please text me the link of ur blog
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I really like that poem because it shows such a deep inner struggle with oneβs self and the many emotions involved, I can only hope to write something equally as profound one day!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation….the writing gets profound with experiences..and more importantly intense experiences..
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Ultimately you keep standing,, bravo
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Haha…yessππ
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Great,,,
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Such brave writing. I fell in love with this line “My eyes are dry, now they dare not weep,”. Such a truthful writeup.
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ππ thanks a million
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