I float deep in the dark ocean of grief,
The pain enters me and I can no longer breathe,
I need peace and so I avoid every strife,
I close my eyes for I shun this life,
My emotions with my soul slowly drift away,
To explore my spirit to find its own way,
My soul free floats in the universe clean,
Away from the corporeal world so mean,
Amidst the calm serene beautiful space,
My soul finds a perfectly pure place,
The bliss and happiness then find my soul,
Making me contented, liberated and whole.
Copyright 2019 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
Chitkala Mulye 
Well written
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Thank you soo much!!
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Very nice.
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😊😊
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you soo much
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Love this poem!
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Thank you soo much
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that means you feel your soul …. nice words
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Thank you Salman
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welcome
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😊😊
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Expressive and hopeful. Good….
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Thank you sooo much 😘😘
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“grief” & “breathe”–good off rhyme
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Thanks😊😊
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You are a very skilled and expressive poet! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you soo much
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“The pain enters me and I can no longer breathe”
Exactly…. Thumbs up !
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😊😊😊😊😊
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AMAZINGLY WRITTEN! and relatable !
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Glad you found it good😊😊😊
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I’m your big fan. Always waiting more updates. ♥
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Thank you soo much!!
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Amazing! Very well written
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Thank you soo much Japs😊😊
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This is beautiful 😀 hope you have a soulful day ❤️
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Thank you soo much😍😍
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This is very deep, lovely poèm
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Glad you liked it😊😊
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Drifted away with you. Fantastic piece.
What is your UBF?
*UBF is short for UnBearable Feeling
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Thank you soo much
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Could be anything….that depends on a situation
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Your depth makes me smile, an exceptionally rare thing for this INFJ
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As long as u are INF you will smile..you are not all the time in the J mood
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Do u have a background of psychology or human resources?
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I have a background in counselling though I’m not in the profession. I rarely meet people of depth so when I do I smile inside but I smile in general.
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Ooo nice
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That’s so sweet of u
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You’re always welcome
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😊😊
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👍☺
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😊
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Amazing,,, Your thoughts are as deep as the ocean. As a matter of fact, I don’t like to read poems but this one is beautiful!!!
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Thank you sooo much…I am glad that I could touch someone’s heart who doesn’t like poetry
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Wow!
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Thanks a lott
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