I wish to surrender my body,
I wish to gift you my soul,
When I burn in your fire again,
With a hope to become a whole;
I try to close my tearful eyes,
With a hope to see you again,
To show those pieces of heart,
Shattered in rejection and pain;
I crave for your passionate touch,
I crave for your desire once,
I wish to see those sparks again,
Like when you fell for me once;
I wish I held that charm over you,
When your eyes were just into me,
Saying, “I am yours and only yours”,
When it was just always all about me;
I wish I could ask for your heart,
I wish I could take your soul,
I wish we could be forever one,
Making the shattered me a whole.
Copyright 2019 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
The longing is quite palpable
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Thanks a lottt
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“I wish we could be forever one, making the shattered me whole”.Beautiful article!
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Thank you soo much Namisi..how old are u?
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Hey Chitkala, I am 24yrs old
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Lucky girl you look very innocent and young…
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That, I am. π
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I can feel the hurt and the longing. But you are always Whole even in singleness. Your words are powerful.
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Thank you soo much
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Deep and poignant poem, Chitkala. Very nice.
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Thank you soo much
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Welcome.
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Honestly youβve said it all..ππ
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Thank you soo much
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I enjoyed reading this piece. Awesome!
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Thanks a lot!
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Somehow you manage to capture the emotional essence of the heart that I read it as if you were talking to me! Honest and captivating, well done βΊ
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O m soooo glad I could touch your heart
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You’ve helped bring me back to poetry. Thanks.
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Thank you sooo much…this means a lottππ
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Wonderful ! Liked and shared. Take care.
How I wish ..
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Thank you sooooo much…
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You ‘re welcome. Have a wonderful day.
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Thank you πππand you too
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Really beautiful piece! Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you soo much β€οΈ
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Very nice.
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Thanks!!
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https://papersonfire.wordpress.com/2019/09/11/epochs-of-amor/
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This piece has so much passion, the vivid imagery is remarkable, as you experience a deep, longing for the one you love. Beautifully penned. ππΈ
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Thank u soo much…m glad you liked it
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You are quite welcome, truly a pleasure
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Beautiful πβ£οΈ
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Beautiful so lyrical, so passionate. Yes carry the monument of rejection so wonderfully well., Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thanks a lotttπβΊοΈβΊοΈβΊοΈ
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Beautifully penned words of desire, longing and pain.
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Thank you so much!!!
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Beeyoutiful ππ
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Thank youβΊοΈ
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Thnx 2 share
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Beautiful lines.
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Thank you soo much
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