Once upon a time my smile reflected in your eyes and so did my tears,
The delicate moments between our blushes bloomed flowers which bathed us in their perfume,
Today those memories have vanished in the sand storm which stood between your charm and me,
Seperating our souls forever…
The storms attacked the sand dunes of my heart breaking it into pieces,
Shackling my emotions that once flowed from my heart to yours,
But today my heart stands strong like the desert in the hot scorching sun of realities,
Where my delicate serene skin is burnt brown,
I am dry and arid like the land untouched with a drop of love passion,
Yes, I am waterless, passionless, and loveless perhaps even hesitant to love now,
The storm took away from me every last droplet of water,
You carried those droplets of passion you had sprinkled on me making me green once..
Your clouds have taken them away blown by the wind and even my liveliness,
The same wind now pours your passion adding sparkle to some green somewhere..
No longer do I long for your love nectar for it is no longer mine,
The clouds will pass over me leaving behind the fragrance of your nectar,
The hot and cool breezes of your memories will blow over me,
Yet I will be strong and unshaken forgetting what loving felt like once upon a time..
Copyright 2020 Chitkala Mulye (Chitkala Aditosh)
So emotionally moving. Beautifully written. Wish u a very happy new year.
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Thank u soo much everyone
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Beautifully written….Great!!!!
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Thank you soo much
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Feelings of great emotions well composed.
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Thanks a loty
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Welcome šš
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Thanks a lotāŗļø
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Reflection of all your emotions which are beautifully expressed in words
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ššthanks for the compliment
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Well put words. Resonates your thoughts and feelings in this write up .
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Thank you soo much āŗļøāŗļø
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Keep Writing, always. Only way to unleash us from the torments in life.
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Yes… ofcourse
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š
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Nice.
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šš
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Moving, well expressed and beautiful all in one. Thank you! Happy New Year.
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Wow thanks for sharing. You gave words to things I feel that I didnāt know how to say.
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Thank you soo much
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Hmm
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Beautiful.
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Thank you soo much
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Thanks a lot.. Keep doing well
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Hello,
This is a beautiful poem. It reminds me of the Song of Solomon. Keep encouraging and inspiring through your poems and writings. God bless you!
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Thank you soooo much šš
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You are more than welcome.
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šš
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This is adorable! Thank you for this!
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Thanks a million
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Absolutely!! š
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š
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Very well written piece
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Thank you soo much
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Your writing style is on point. Your descriptions sell every sentence. Great job!
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Haha..thank you soo much
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Great expressions…
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Thank you soo much
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Deep rooted…..and heartfelt.
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Thank you soo much
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Perhaps it feels so bad when the little moment of your happiness, the moment you thought would last forever, in the end, turns out to be the biggest deception.
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Yess it does!
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Yes, I am waterless, passionless, and loveless perhaps even hesitant to love now,
have you been there, the words suggest a truth, so well done, thank you
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Thank you soo much
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Thanks for taking time away from your writing to visit my blog!
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šš
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A moving piece of Literature leaving the pathos of feeling. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you soo much
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HI Chitkala What do you do? I am a teacher of English. I would like to know you more.
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Check the contact page of my website
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Blown away Chitkala, and i’m not often moved by words… Wow!
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Thanks a million
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